Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Could be....

Alessandra is not the character who first catches my attention; Giorgio is. His haunted look resonates with me, and I think that when his palm was read, he knew that the battle they're heading for will be his last. I'm not sure that he was actually told that, though. Delving into Alessandra is how I'll decide if Giorgio was told straight out that he's going to die, or if Alessandra is a charleton, or too nice--couching her reading in vague platitudes. Not sure yet. That's one of the things to be explored as I go through this process.

Here's what I do notice, however. Alessandra, a fortune teller in a tavern, perhaps even a gypsy, is dressed in the colors usually reserved for the Virgin Mary--with the addition of the deep blood red. Foreshadowing the blood to be shed on the battlefield? I think so. But the Madonna-ish tone to her... still thinking about that. Is she a prophet? Holy? Doesn't feel right...Is she pure in some sense? Maybe. More on this later, I'm sure.

Monday, January 19, 2009

Hands

I thought I was going to write about the setting today, which I think should be a tavern. But when I started looking at the picture, the strongest image I got was hands. Detailed hands, hands that define and create the action. There's Alessandra and Nico, her holding his hand as she reads it. But that's only the beginning. For every character except Marcel, telling about their state of mind and/or station in life includes reading their hands. Herve and Reynaldo, their stealthy hands where they don't belong; Joseph, pouring midair, a practiced motion worthy of an innkeeper's son, perhaps? Giorgio, gripping the table with one hand, a drink with the other. And Andreas, hand resting near his weapon. Thinking about this...more later.

Sunday, January 18, 2009

Day Three: Finishing Names

Time to make decisions. Soldier one, Marcel. Dedicated to Mars. That works. The one whose palm is being read: Nico. The soldier with his back to the audience is hard to name. Because he’s wearing a sword, I think he’s a soldier. Andreas, Greek for man—that’s his name. He’s my blank slate, and he could either be the pivotal part of my story, of barely a footnote.


So, from left to right: Herve (dwarf), Reynaldo, Alessandra, Marcel, Andreas, Nico, Joseph, and Giogio. Odd names, but I have an idea how those names fit. We’ll see…

Day Three: Naming Redux

The taller thief, behind the fortune teller, is Reynaldo. In some tangled logic, that’s an homage to Ronald Reagan. The man pouring the wine….he’s tricky. For a long time, I believed he was a soldier, but he’s not. No armor. No weapon. And he’s serving them. So figuring out his relationship to others in the picture will be my job. In the meantime, a name. Joseph. There are reasons, but none that matter—and it may help me form his character as I go on. That leaves three. By the end of today, I’ll name them.

Saturday, January 17, 2009

Day Two

On the far right is the character who haunts me. When I look at the painting in the Great Gallery in Toledo, that’s the character who is looking straight back at me. It’s hard to see him well in the small reproductions, but he has a look of resignation, pain—in Jesus Christ Superstar, Pilate describes Jesus’ expression as “a haunted, hunting kind.” That’s what I see here. Also, he strongly resembles George Harrison during the Maharishi phase, so I am naming him Giorgio.

A quick name, needing no explanation: the dwarf is Herve.

Friday, January 16, 2009

Naming

Day One:

Before I can really write about the characters, I need names. Names tell so much about the characters. For simplicity’s sake, until I have names, I will call them : dwarf, thief, fortune teller, Soldier 1 (closest to her), Feather (back to us), Hand (the one whose hand she’s reading), Waiter, and…the last one really haunts me. I’ll have his name tomorrow.

Today, though, the fortune teller. I want to call her Cassandra, but….obvious. I’d been trying to come up with a gypsy-sounding name, but Esmerelda was it; again, too obvious.

Alessandra, a variant of Cassandra. That Works!